My narrative By Lorenzo

        The House on fire

                By Lorenzo.

There lived a Father called Charlie and a mother named Noleen . Their children’s  Names  were David and cyamorah. They lived in a Huge beautiful house, one night  they Must have been sleeping and their house must of caught on fire. Someone had

forgotten or to blow out the candle maybe the candle was on the window. During the night the windy breeze made the candle set the curtain alight. The curtains went up in flames and the fire spread across the two storey house. Lucky Charlie wakes up in the middle of the night to the smell of smoke, he wakes up his wife and rushes to his children. Still trapped inside the family uses their fire safely skills and get low and crawl out down their stairs all the way out their back door safely onto their lawn. The firefighters arrive in their big red trucks with their hoses ready to help. The firefighters spray the house with water until the fire is put out, most of the house has been burnt. Sadly most of their house has been burnt to ashes, the firefighters leave for the night. Thier job is done. Lucky everyone survived, but now Charlie and Noelene have no where to sleep and their kids were very scared. As time passed they brought a new house, when they go to bed now or leave their house they make sure everything is turned off at the wall and no candles are in use, so they can sleep peacefully with no worries at night.

        The end.